I have now submitted my first 250 words to the contest, so THANK YOU ALL for helping me get my submission ready! You are fantastic blog followers. Gold stars all around.
So for now, if any of you can run over to my dear friend KAREN M. KRUEGER’S BLOG Typing with my Toes to give your feedback on her 250 words, that would be so helpful. She wants to get more feedback before she submits!
Thanks again!
Chersti Nieveen 
Sorry I missed it, but it looks good to me! Good luck!
Oh thank you, Liesl! I really value your opinion.